16.3.11

Exercise

tai chi
slicing the morning mist
in quarters
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  1. Chen-ou Liu, 劉鎮歐March 23, 2011 at 6:55 AM

    Carolyne,

    The diction of your poem makes this poem effective. And the imagery adds a sense of yugen.

    Nicely done.

    Chen-ou

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  2. CarolyneMay 24, 2011 at 8:50 AM

    Thank you, Chen-ou for your kind comment!

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  3. CarolyneMay 24, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for your feedback. I live for that!

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